Away with Separation

This is an old poem I wrote a few years ago. I felt like sharing it here. It was written for no one in particular, just for my fellow companions in this world. I’ve written this many times before, but we live in a world where there is more individuality and less community. It is important to establish independence, but at the same time, we shouldn’t feel that relying on our friends and Loved ones is a bad thing. On the contrary, we were created as social beings; we are all on this journey together and we need each other.

A Vision of the Universe awakens the Soul
Life soars, dives, spins, and rolls
Discover how small we are
Yet how precious at the same time

Sparkling dust reveals splendid gems
Leave your world behind
And pass through the Rose Portal
For it is Love from which you stem

Your world is of duality
People of colors, races, and genders divided
Ours is a world of unity
It is here where you feel alive!

Here, we do not say black or white
Here, we do not argue and fight
Here, we celebrate diversity
How wonderfully this delights the King!

Do not crush Flowers by saying “man” or “woman”
We believe in no such division!
The Prophet preached we are One
Fill your heart with this Truth and witness Divine union

After challenges, Lovers rest in arms, young
They listen to the mourning violin
And how it longs for the reward of patience
They are reminded of music they once strummed

By the Heavenly Rivers, they will marry
They will merge into a single Spirit
This is your destiny too, dear companions
To here, the Angels will carry

Beyond this Glorious Universe, we transcend
We can discover its blessed Secrets
Take my hand, I beg you, friend
And pass through this Portal with me

Let us become One

~ Broken Mystic~



  1. Aafke said,

    June 19, 2008 at 9:30 pm

    A beautiful poem, and a very true sentiment.
    Thank you fro sharing.
    I have not read your previous post because I still have to see the movie: I’m trying to get my brother to come with me.

  2. darvish said,

    June 24, 2008 at 5:31 pm

    Really lovely poem, filled with truth and quite universal in scope 🙂

    Ya Haqq!

  3. brokenmystic said,

    June 26, 2008 at 5:25 pm

    Thanks Darvish!

    Aafke, thanks 🙂 Hope you get to see the movie. Let me know what you think when you do!

  4. farooqk said,

    June 28, 2008 at 9:38 pm

    sweet words,and nice blog

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